Thursday, October 17, 2013
October Memoir and Backstory Challenge: Secrets #2
Market Day
Watching the crowds walk past my booth
I amuse myself with the variety of
dogs and owners on parade.
I even see a kid on a leash,
and even that kid is enjoying
the unseasonably warm October day.
I'm surrounded by my paintings and pins,
cards and crafts.
I've been in a market since the Spring of '92
and I am used to not selling much
sometimes
On this Saturday of a holiday weekend
I sell a mottled gold cat pin.
Ten dollars total for the day,
but the promise of bigger sales
keeps me hoping for the future.
Walking to the car after I tear down my booth
I drag my canopy behind me with one hand,
and cradle my two trays of greeting cards with the other.
I am ready for this part of my day to be over.
I feel the blue plastic containers slipping
and as they are about to fall
a man from behind offers me help
With relief I accept it.
He takes my canopy
and I carry the card trays securely with both hands.
"Are you a vendor?" I ask
"Yes", he says.
"Did you have a good day today? The weather was great."
He stops.
I stop.
Quietly he leans in toward me and whispers,
"We made $2000.00 today!"
While telling me this his eyes fill with astonishment
and his body barely stops itself from leaping into mid-air.
(Good thing he's weighed down by my canopy, I muse.)
"That's fantastic!" I reply,
as I'm never going to tell him what I am really thinking.
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4 comments:
Oh, that last line works so well. Another poem that had me laughing because the only other appropriate response is to cry. I love the seasonality of this one, too.
LOL!
The ideal-selling-conditions algorithm is more complicated than meets the eye. one of my best days was when there was a problem with garbage pickup and I had a massive smelly heap of trash behind my spot. Perhaps it was generating pseudo human pheromones.
Oh! Kind of you to restrain yourself and kind of him to help. Such acts = priceless!
Hah! I'm sorry your sales aren't higher; that can be discouraging. Your optimistic outlook will certainly serve you well!
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